Thursday, July 7, 2011

And more progress

Just drafted a hook. Of course it sucks, it's a first draft; but I think the last line is a keeper.

"And what kind of man would she be if she left Miss Diana to fend for herself in a nest of vipers?"

I wonder, is A Nest of Vipers a decent title for this?

I work to the music of nail guns - the workmen are back.

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